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My Love, ...

 

 

In your absence, I often looked at my hand, wondering why it is not with yours. During those moments, I grew to realize how strange it is that the heart... is just like the hand.

 

 

The heart, like the hand,

...when opened can feel others, touch others, move others.

...when closed can hide things, protect things.

...when forced on others can give pressure, give pain.

...when gentle to others can give comfort, give security.

 

The heart, like the hand,

...can pull others, sometimes back, sometimes near.

...can push others, sometimes forward, sometimes away.

...can lift weight, and carry burdens.

...can hold on, and let go.

 

The heart, like the hand,

...can get tired.

...can get weak.

...can get wounded.

...can get scarred.

 

But the heart, like the hand,

can prove to be strong when needed.

 

 

One day it will be your heart, and your hand, that I ask for as I kneel before you.

For one day I hope that our hearts shall be together, like our hands, on that day, 'till forever.

 

 

Your Love, ...


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Aww, it's so sweet. You have talent there, I can't help but comment on it. ^^


Edited by Beforethefall, 29 March 2013 - 12:13 PM.
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 ✧ ;  Every time I close my eyes I can touch the colors around me, suddenly I realize everything I thought was impossible is here, and my heart sings in a world so incredible, and everything burns much brighter.

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Aww, it's so sweet. You have talent there, I can't help but comment on it. ^^

 

]Why thank you. :D I've never really done 'romantic' or 'mushy' in anything so I wanted to give it a try.


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Why thank you. :D I've never really done 'romantic' or 'mushy' in anything so I wanted to give it a try.

 

You're welcome. Ah, is this your first try then? If so, this is good enough already. ^^


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Awwwwwweee~ I love it~ Very very adorable.

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You're welcome. Ah, is this your first try then? If so, this is good enough already. ^^

 

 

Awwwwwweee~ I love it~ Very very adorable.

 

[Well thank you both~ I actually need romance in a certain story I'll writing in the future so I really want to improve on things like this as early as now. owo


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